Final Amnesty Critique

We had our final Amnesty Crit yesterday, we were put into groups and asked to comment on another groups work. We spent half an hour looking at the final ideas and came up with questions to ask the others about their designs.

Everybody then got back together and talked about the work we had looked at, giving our opinions and saying how we think the final piece could be improved.

I got some good feedback about my design, there is a few things that were pointed out that I will look into and develop. Overall it was very helpful to get so many different opinions and it gives me a chance to look at my final piece and change it where necessary.

Deadline : Friday 23rd January

Amnesty Critique

We had an crit today with our PAL leaders so we could have a look through our work so far as the deadline is fast approaching. I have quite a few sketches on design sheets for the T section of the bus and have and have made a few examples of how I want my poster for the bus stop to look.

It was very helpful getting the PAL leaders views on my work. They had some good points about how I could improve my idea and which would get the message across best.

In the next couple of days I am going to play around with some layouts and try and get a better idea of exactly how I want my piece to look. Then once I am set on one idea I am going to spend the next week working on this and getting everything finalized.